After having some peers watch my
animatic, they gave both comments and targets to help improve my ideas. The variety of shots were well used in their effectiveness, (
over-the-shoulder,
long shot,
medium shots). It was commented that the music connected well with the
storyline and the
genre of the film. All liked the style of the credits being included in the film (attached to objects in the
mise-en-scene). The presentation of the characters was thought to be clear and easily understood, as well as the type of relationship between the two characters. Also it was commented that the genre was easily identifiable.
Targets
- Prehaps some more dialogue to give more of an introduction to who the characters are.
- Adjust the music to return to normal volume after the characters have said their dialogue.
- Maybe add in some more close-up's to show more emotion from both the male and female characters.
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