Assessment

Further audience feedback has reinforced the issues of the audio around the areas of dialogue. But at the same time my concern of having the title in the same shot as one of the credits has proven to confuse the audience as to what the title of the film is. Fortunately this problem was solved by removing the shot containing the title and the credit, then creating the title on Live Type to place after the second production logo. Though because the credit that was featured in that specific shot gives credit to the artists music that I am using, I am going to possibly re-film that shot without the credit in it or film the credit in another place.

 (the title enlarges towards the screen, representing the sound of someone talking resonating)

The comments on the audio related to the swift increase in volume after the dialogue was finished, that it was too sudden. However, this can be easily remedied on Final Cut. Yet I want to more careful than before, because I went through a few trial periods where the music was either too slow coming back in or too loud. I will continue to get others to assess the quality of the audio to get the right balance.